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Compare yourself with those who on the Lord’s Day hear nothing except the dismal sound of the world. What a privilege it is for you to hear the proclamation of the gospel!
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Compare yourself with those who on the Lord’s Day hear nothing except the dismal sound of the world. What a privilege it is for you to hear the proclamation of the gospel! Bakker, Frans.
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Friday
Aug172007

Poetry Friday: A quote

 "Poetry is ordinary language raised to the nth power. Poetry is boned with ideas, nerved and blooded with emotions, all held together by the delicate, tough skin of words. "
-- Paul Engle

Last week I stumbled across The Wordy Girls blog.  On Thursdays, they post a photograph and the challenge is to write a poem of 15 words or less (not counting the title).  I decided to give it a go.  I thought it would be hard.  I thought I couldn't do it.  But I did it and it was fun and I'll probably try to do it each week.  I promised myself that I would do it as soon as I see the photo and would never spend more than 15 minutes on the exercise.

I'm not the poetic type; I am a logical, linear thinker and it's hard for me to express myself through poetry so I figure this will be good for me.  I'll be posting my poems here on Friday so that I can remember them and find them again.  You can see the photo that inspired the poem here.

Impermanence

Packing , dumping, planning, shaping.

Building impermanence.

Slipping, slipping, slipping
through the hour glass of life.

---Kim from Hiraeth

And my first entry:  (photo of a door and dark windows, no sign of life)

Unforgiveness 

Stark.
Dark.
Parked on the threshold.

Right hand fisted,
knocking resisted.

Entrance doubted.
Forgiveness withheld.

--Kim from Hiraeth

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Reader Comments (3)

Poety has always confused me. I'm stirred by its beauty, but confused by its lack of symmetry. I had a high school teacher who used to "correct" my poems to make them more symmetrical. I thought the whole point of poetry was that there didn't have to be a rhyme or a reason.

I love yours, however. I clicked over and looked at the photos - amazing what you can say in 15 words or less, isn't it?

Why don't you give it a go? Nothing says anyone has to read what you wrote! Write for yourself. You might be surprised, as I was, how easy it is.

August 17, 2007 | Unregistered CommenterKaren

Hey! You're good! I love writing within a framework like that - fun stuff.
why don't you play along? It's perfect for you. Not a big commitment of time but a way to keep writing.

August 17, 2007 | Unregistered CommenterRebecca

Nice work, Kim. It's really neat to see where your mind goes when you concentrate on a photograph. I like the direction you took for both of your poems. XO

August 20, 2007 | Unregistered CommenterJill

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