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In (almost) 15 words or less

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So. . .

. . .about that deposit over there?
It wasn't that I didn't care.
I tried!
(At least you didn't slide!)

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More In 15  Words or Less Poems at laurasalas

 UPDATED TO ADD:

I never read Laura's post until after I compose my poem (so I don't get any ideas from anything other than the photo) and when I went back to read it, I learned that the puppy is not a puppy after all and his name is Captain Jack Sparrow.  As a huge fan of Cap'n Jack, I decided this dog needed a more appropriate poem.

Looking into that sweet little face, it was hard to think of that boy Jack as a pirate. But then, I remembered he is a beagle and beagles are notorious thieves. Here's my ode to Jack the Pirate-y Beagle:

Yes, I nicked it,
don't look irate;
but you knew that
I am a Pirate.
Posted on Thursday, May 15, 2008 at 08:38AM by Registered CommenterKim from Hiraeth in , | Comments4 Comments

Reader Comments (4)

Here are my 15 words...

In a brown box
Two books
Are travelling your way
An envelope will arrive first...

Yippee! I like those words! Can't wait to get them (and blog about them!!)

May 15, 2008 | Unregistered Commenterellen b

I love both of your poems! Isn't he an adorable dog?

May 15, 2008 | Unregistered CommenterDorothy

TOO adorable!! Who could resist that face!?!

May 15, 2008 | Unregistered Commenterlawyerchik1

Ha! I NEED that little bit of guidance Laura gives to get me going, lol. Hence, I KNEW Jack was a pirate.

Darlin' submissions--but how could you miss with that face?? :)

May 16, 2008 | Unregistered CommenterRobin

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