Thursday
Jan152009
In 15 Words or Less
Thursday, January 15, 2009 at 07:55AM
It's been a while since I've participated in Laura's In 15 Words or Less Challenge. This morning's picture nudged me out of my frozen poetry slump. An eleven word description for you:
Solid, liquid, vapor;
Descending froth, silken shards
of tarnished, halting motion.
Not great, I know, but I do feel a thaw beginning.
Reader Comments (2)
Not great?! I think that's fantastic. People like you who can come up with beautiful thoughts like that are amazing to me. Beautiful!
I felt bitterly cold.